Awwwwww. That's so sweet! And very beautiful. ^-^ Sadder than I was expecting, I admit, but very beautiful. It's got a wonderful lyricism and rhythm to it. (I really, really liked the one-line paragraphs. They're so short, but they say so, so much. Some of them say even more than the longest paragraphs in this piece.)
Eeee! Thank you, hun! <3 (I'm glad you liked the idea and ran with it. But eeeee! I love it! <3<3<3<3)
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Date: 2011-06-19 06:32 pm (UTC)Eeee! Thank you, hun! <3 (I'm glad you liked the idea and ran with it. But eeeee! I love it! <3<3<3<3)